【CET-6关键词作文】Save Wild Animals

「CET-6关键词作文」Save Wild Animals

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled Save Wild Animals. Your composition should include the following words and phrases. You should write no less than 160 words.

1.world population, less space, cease to exist

2.main danger, man’s activities, nature reserves, in addition, international law

3.in conclusion, measures

【范文】

Save Wild Animals

Animals in their natural state are part of the wonder of creation① and the treasure of our world. However, as a result of the steady growth of the world population, there is less and less space on our planet for wild animals. Unless something is done, some species② of animals will cease③ to exist in their wild state, which also means a disaster④ to human beings.

The main danger to animal existence comes from man’s activities. One of the most effective measures to avoid the extinction⑤ of wild animals is for all countries to create nature reserves⑥ where all the native species of animals can wander free and be protected from men. Certain rare species that are going to be extinct should be collected, fed and reproduced⑦ artificially⑧. In addition, people should realize that the loss of any species is at least the loss of a source of knowledge and a source of natural beauty. Therefore, human beings should enforce an international law forbidding the use and sale of meat, skins, horns and tusks from wild animals. We do great wrong if we allow any of their species to die out.

In conclusion, only if we human beings take some drastic measures, can wild animals be preserved. Otherwise, we, human beings, are bound to destroy ourselves.

【注释】

①creation: 创造

②species: 种类

③cease: 停止

④disaster: 灾难

⑤extinction: 灭绝

⑥nature reserves: 自然保护区

⑦reproduced: 繁殖

⑧artificially: 人工地

【简评】

这是一篇根据题目所给关键词完成的议论文。关键词对于文章的构造起至关重要的作用,所以首先必须仔细研究,反复推敲这些关键词和题目之间的关系,确定它们代表的中心思想,确定出文章大致的框架。然后通过关键词写出文章的主题句,并根据主题句构思每段的发展脉络和段落之间的逻辑关系。最后,紧密围绕主题,采用恰当的表达方法,便可顺理成章完成全文。

本文首段开宗明义,介绍野生动物是世界的宝贵财富。但是,由于世界人口增长过快,野生动物的生存空间大为减少。第二段,用列举法和因果法详细说明我们应采取有效措施保持野生动物,如建立自然保护区和制定国际性法律来保护它们。尾段,作者用in conclusion引出结论:Only if we human beings take some drastic measures, can wild animals be preserved.

这篇文章主题明确,重点突出,详略得当。各式从句和分词结构的灵活使用,使得本文意蕴充实,错落有致。

资料来源:新大学英语四、六级考点透视丛书:六级写作/李华田主编,武汉大学出版社,2006

「CET-6关键词作文」Save Wild Animals

「CET-6关键词作文」Save Wild Animals